Two fireballs over the course of two comics? Yay!
I don’t really like everything between the first and last panel, though… I guess I’ll just have to try harder on the next page to make up for it.
Just to be clear he did’ent hit Eshita (the cat girl) with that fireball did he? its kinda hard to tell, it really looks like he slammed it right into her face
It is kinda unclear, huh? No he didn’t hit Eshi in the face
So if not the face, did he hit her in the back? Or just barely miss as she jumps out of the way?
Shame, then. He owes her two!
Never get him pissed off on you. He likes to kill it with fire!
That’s what I set my fazers to.
On a diffferent note. I did detect the page being a bit off. It’s still a good comic so I wont criticize this page…at all… or ever…
Is he supposed to be speaking in the third panel? If so, when is it that Eshita starts speaking, as she appears to be in the following panels…
It’s Eshi talking in the third through sixth panels
So to throw a fireball he has to reach behind his head? That seems a bit inconvenient.
The idea is that he’s lifting the weed from panels 2-3 over his head to carry it over to the hole and throw it.
I think I failed at visual storytelling pretty hard on this page >< Oh well, every time I mess up I learn more about what not to do.
No you didn’t I got it when I first read it.
straight fucking up!!! I love this kid!! haha now all he needs is the fork of truth and hes set. lol
And a liver hat. You are not officail without a liver hat lol
yeah, we can’t copy the kidney hat. Its made from real kidney!
Then maybe if we ask nicely and have anti magic wards on, we might be able to get Richard’s pillaging shovel.
aiming to high, go for the bear arms. claws watever, hes more likely to give tose up.
true true. But first we must anwser the riddles three.
step up from thermite isn’t it? lol if only i could do that i could solve all my problems.
oh wow i’m stupid, i thought they pissed him off enough to get him to summon a fireball out of anger. smart little imp.
so apparently he can hold a burning tumbleweed without hurting his hands…
…or he just is on an adrenaline rush and next page he’ll be like “ow, that was stupid.”
This is a great comic and usual I don’t donate((Cause im broke)) but I was wondering… do you NEED pay pal to donate?
I don’t think so. You can pay into or through pay pal just using your credit card, if I remember right.
damn,,, no credit card well I would ask you for your adress, BUT that would sound very weird…
No worries. It’s the thought that counts
If only my thoughts could give money XD i’d be rich.
How’d he do that? Was that just a spontanous outburst? I mean he used his lighter last time i thought not summoning fire like this.
I bet he’ll be a bit cocky for a bit afterwardsif that fireball thing works out
ah nvm i see the tumbleweed now… ehehhe creative little imp isnt he?
He used the lighter again this time =) If he can conjure fire, he doesn’t know how. Sorry I didn’t make that too clear.
I repeat. Laz needs to learn to use his powers. If he has any. Which he should, considering that he can hold fire and not be hurt and his claws are armor-piercing.
Maybe its just me with my very active imagination able to fill in any blanks, but I think you did just fine with the strip. I especially liked the second to last panel where Laz has the brush-fire-ball over his head – awesome! Would make a pretty decent wallpaper:) [maybe with the caption "Little kid with a torch, huh?"] Thanks for the laughs and enjoyment!
It did take a second look to understand what was going on, but I think that’s a good thing. The monkeys may know about the lighter, but that doesn’t mean Eshita does.
I like what you did with the background for the panels. Looks good.
I wish there was more contrast with the comment box. It is a little hard to write in.
Wow… the little ape dudes will be scared for sure by that…
hmmmm the burning bush reminds me of when i had gonnrea
“You have messed with the great and powerful Laz, and now must suffer the consequences. I summon the Burning Rain of Death.”
+5 Internets to the first person who identifies the movie that line came from.
Hocus Pocus, change the Laz to Max i think.
Well put, sir, well put. I’ll ceartliny make note of that.
Fire does burn monkey monks right? XD
I don’t know, they tend to have crazy high reflex saves.
love how he seems less distinct to draw attention to the weed in panel 3
Also the movie is Hocus Pocus
A better Fwoosh than the last one for certain
9 for the leap 2 for the landing
some things money can’t buy
for everything else, there’s FWOOSH
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